All Comments on 'Finding Meridian Ch. 04'

Hey, great story so far! I can barely wait til tomorow for the next chapter. Cont the good work!

While I certainly followed what was going on, this chapter strangely made no sense. Why was Meridian losing her job (my apologies if I missed that in the previous chapter)? Why couldn't she just call the police? She was attacked, there was no reason for her to cover anything up. This just didn't gel.

Hi, this is my first story and a lot of questions will be answered in upcoming chapter. I doubt I'll have an editor for the rest of this story but I am finishing this one before starting the next.

Thx for all the support and comments!

Meridian

I really like the story, but you're in need of an editor to check for typos and spelling and grammar errors. The plot and characters are great, and you've got a good storytelling voice, but the errors are way distracting.

getting good! More please! :)

Ok I am really getting into this. I am looking forward to more, more, and need I say more

I know the story is probably complete but, damn. Everything happens so fast. More explanation is needed. More details that aren't lists. . . . It IS exciting.