All Comments on 'Finding Meridian Ch. 06'

All the other chapters have been great. This one was a little too packed with new things. Connor is a Vamp? Vamps are "out" in the world to the point they sometimes work for the government? Genevieve is not only a famous rock star but she is a famous mediator and a retired government agent? It is a lot of stuff dumped on us with next to no forshadowing. Again I love the story line and even the new directions its taking but maybe more for shadowing in previous chapters next time. Keep going at it you have alot of talent.

Too much happens here and much too quickly. It doesn't necessarily follow from what's happened before, either. If you could slow down and lay some more foundation, it would be good.

Your comments have helped me immensely. They are the reason for a delay in the upcoming chapters. Slowing things down a bit and adding some background to help out. The next chapter should be posted around the end of next week.

The vampire info will be cleared up either in this chapter or the next one. Appreciate all the comments!Yes, I gave myself a 75% to show I went a wee bit too fast.

Meridian

MORE ASAP! I LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Please post soon, have to see where you are taking the story. I do love it so far.

I bet you shes not dead...Ohhh I love a woman who follows her gut feeling;ohhhhh I'm so hooked to see whats going to happen next...Marcus at least needs to be laid by her LOL