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Sadly adding another man to the "family" vastly lowered the stories enjoyment.
idiots
The story is one of sexual freedom, of letting go of taboo and boundaries. Rick is sharing his hot blonde wife, the three girls are sharing everything. Stop trying to put yourselves in the position of CONTROL where none of this could happen.
Or go read another mind control story, cuz that's so much more likely.
Jumped the Shark
While still mildly amusing, this is no longer worth reading. I think you jumped the shark in the last chapter with the girl on the balcony. Loosing believability, much more important in a work of fiction than even eroticism, really ruins a story for the reader.
Think about that in your next try.
I so wanted to like this series.
why are you so eager to share the wife in your stories man???
In most of your stories either your characters are spineless wimps, cuckolds or reluctantly in an open marriage scenario or a combination of all pathetic losers...
this was the first story I found myself truly enjoying and you had to go and add another man into the story. why does he not share his wifes with all his teammates and his boss??? maybe she could be put to being a whore again in the village?
I dont care what most say. free love ends up equaling to no love.
Maybe your next chapter can have the main character blowing and ultimately getting fucked by other dudes... Sheesh man what a waste of time. The rating and category sure gave a wrong impression of this story..
you are a good writer. but your characters suck and there is not even a hint of realism in them...
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