All Comments on 'BattleBabe vs The Smugglers Ch. 02'

I was unable to receive the pictures.

FYI, I'm not sure why the pictures aren't appearing; I sent a comment in, so hopefully it'll get rectified soon.

I like your illustrated story but same thing no pictures poping up on chapter two

No Pictures

What happens to the drawings on alot of these stories. Sure would be nice to see some. Isn't illustrated suppose to be part of it?

It sucks that we can't see the pics for this chapter, but I still loved the story!

I think BattleBabe is my new favorite superhero! Please write some more stories!

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Very good story only let down by the lack of pics in the place holders

Too bad this one doesn't.

Actually illustrated does mean sketches not pictures.

Quit being a troll.

Its so dam old...

It's usually very difficult to execute a contrived and cheesy concept without it being jarring and tough to read. This isn't usually my kind of story (a little too much plot for me, I'm just in it for the abuse) but I liked it, it was very readable. Good execution and pacing.

Every one of the stories have been entertaining, and the skill to draw in the first place is something I envy to begin with. Let alone just writing as a start.

ArteestX Please, please keep going. You have talent, and are appreciated.

Good storyline, enjoyed the pics. But her hands were kind of weird.

This was the best series I have ever read and I loved every second of it