All Comments on 'Our Charnel Grounds'

Triggers reflections on our mortality and our spiritual connections.

I can't quite pinpoint it, bu I think there are a couple of places where the wording could be improved for flow.

So much has been done to our world originally by ignorance but we are knowing now and still it goes on. Well done excellent poem

As others have said, it's is thought provoking, though perhaps a teensy bit on the obscure side. I'd probably change the word order a little (and hyphenate "God-fearing"), but that would be my style, not yours, and it's a good poem anyway.