homeNon-Erotic PoetryShootPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Shoot

byCuriouswife©
All
Comments (1)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Tzara07/06/09

Good fireworks analogy

which avoids the "bad things happen playing with fire" cliché (though the "let the ashes of what once was / blast in my face again" might be a little TMI. ;-)
Good read, generally, though.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Shoot  or
More submissions by Curiouswife.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel