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I've read about 100 of your stories/chapters.
I've read about 100 of your stories/chapters. So far, it seems that all of your protagonists are wusses. I don't mean bullies, physically tough, hostile or anything else like that. I mean they are blundering along terrified of life, of themselves, and of their parents. Worst of all they have little or no gumption, if they had to face a true crisis on their own, they wouldn't survive.
You often use the phrases "Good Hell" and "Fuck Me" I'm also in my 60s, have not lived a sheltered life and have never heard a real person say "Fuck Me", I have read it in a few other places. Other than in your stories I've never even read the phrase "Good Hell" before. If this is a colloquialism, on what part of the planet is it commonly used.
I rate you as a three so far, none of your stories are great with the notable exception of the one about the guy who lived next door to the woman that had a stroke. Even though she was seriously impaired, he saw her as a real person, not just a bothersome bit of protoplasm. Even better he went far to understand and communicate with her.
-- srgeek --
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