All Comments on 'Packed Train'

Loved it, very raw and hot.

Thank you for the story. I hope you have more adventures like this one.

I wish i could enjoy that type of subway ride!!!!

Write more.

I really enjoyed your story. I know stuff like this goes on all the time on packed subways. You could follow up with another chapter when they all get back in touch. Keep writing please about other public instances as well.

Loved the story and dreamed it, or something similar, was happening to me, I do wish I was brave enough to do something like that.

Great story. Lets have more of your adventures in showing off please.

Enjoyed it a lot. It was SEXY. Thanks for sharing. More please.

But you know what, the writing was good but the story, obviously a fantasy, as that doesn't really happen in reality, could have been better. And I think you'll come up with it. Mancelt.

I really enjoyed your story, public exhibitionism is one of my favorite subjects. This wasn't quite as good as some of the other "Train Adventure" stories I've read here, but it's not a bad start.

I love to read stories where someone is felt up (weather they know who it is or not) on trains, buses or elevators (any where public). Especially when the person being felt up is the same sex as the one doing the feeling. I also love when the person being felt up gets grinded on until they make the person cum. Your story covered all of those bases...really enjoyed it continue writing. Hot and sexy!

Hot Story Carol b....Hot Story! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Too fast with no buildup, and too short with too little detail. I know it's a fantasy, but what good is a fantasy if it's not in the least believable?

This was good. Timing was about right, IMHO; the young lady got on the train hoping something would happen, after all. Progression was believable; I could have wished for perhaps a bit more internal dialogue, how she was feeling about what was happening, her bodies' reaction to what was happening, and then how she felt about that; the whole feedback loop can simply give you the story entirely. On the whole very nice. Please do more?

Wishing I was there gotted love IT.:-):-)

Public sensuality is such a turn-on. Reading this was even more arousing knowing that the writer was telling a true story. And that she was less than an hour away from me.

I was there for a meeting, rode the public system for 3 days. Amazing, easy to tell which women are there for some kicks and there are quite a few of them. Some of the runs are so packed a person can barely move, but in those 3 days I saw several women get seriously molested and had one manage to get her hand down the front of my slacks.

Japan is kind of crazy, stuff like that is almost expected.

My wife and I go one better. She wears a button through dress with no bra or panties. I press her against the pole rubbing my hard cock against her bum then I reach round and slowly unbutton her dress exposing more and more of her naked body. Sometimes she'll just stay there with her dress hanging open letting everybody have a good feel,but occasionally if she get really worked up she'll slip it right off and she'll stay like that even when we get off.