where is the next chapter.....i will be lookin out....so far so good...an excellent piece so far!
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Anonymous11/07/09
Very promising
This one's great! Much much much more promising than the stories you published in March. You must really have worked on your writing and plottting between March and when you wrote this. It's good to know you've been in contact with wavyscribe as her skill is evident in how her two novels here are pretty much solid gold and imho two of the three best gay novels on Literotica.
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Next chapter please!!. I love it
dont keep us waiting....
where is the next chapter.....i will be lookin out....so far so good...an excellent piece so far!
Very promising
This one's great! Much much much more promising than the stories you published in March. You must really have worked on your writing and plottting between March and when you wrote this. It's good to know you've been in contact with wavyscribe as her skill is evident in how her two novels here are pretty much solid gold and imho two of the three best gay novels on Literotica.
Be encouraged! Keep writing! You're great!
omg
i wish you could continue this its amazing
waiting.....
enjoyed the setup for chapter 2....waiting for the next installment with bated breathe.
can you please do the 2nd chapter?!
you always leave me hanging with your stories! i like the way they start but i always want to see how they end!
Where are the other chapters?
I want to know what happens next and the first chapter was a good opening, but now i want more! Please write more chapters!!
Dun dun daaaaaaaaaahh!
Lol.
and yet another story fucked up by a lazy writer who has not bothered adding to this story
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