All Comments on 'Sally's 21st Birthday'

Nicole you have written a great story really enjoyed it! WOW WOW WOW. Keep them cumming

Definately enjoyed your story Nicole. Nice progression from start to finish. You take the reader from innocence to having a raging hard-on by the end of it. I wished I was the brother. I liked the humor in "wow's" her brother was saying also. I would like to see more stories from you.

Nice story Nicole. I liked the way you built it up. Now if I only had a brother.

I would love to read that Mike did return to his sisters apartment with one thing on his mind and that one thing was to love the woman that gave him so much pleasure on her 21Th birthday. Show her that he loves her with all of his heart, and soul and wants her to be his only lover, and him to be the only man she ever knows sexually. That would be such a sweet story. Thanks for the good post......Rich

I enjoyed your story Nicole, it provided thrilling excitement to the male organ! I thought you did very well with the mind and temptation; and the true temptation won and both had the pleasure so well deserved. Thanks again.

im ususally not into this subject, but this story got me off!! very nice!!

. . . my disbelief, that is. You had the makings of a very sexy story, but the fact that the sister was "asleep" made it seem a bit improbable. You write well, though, and I'd love to read more from you.

I had to give you five stars for that, if no other reason. I also found it a bit improbable that she could have slept through it all, but you did leave it up for grabs. You have the capability of writing some good bro/sis tales. I would like to see more. Thanks for your submission.

Hi Nicole

Love your work. You have written it well. Love your erotic nature being expressed.

I really liked this story. The humorous and sexy Mike 'took' his sister's virginity. I also loved how Sally was 'asleep' during all this. I hope Sally and Mike get together again. Her actually 'waking up' during the act and encouraging Mike on. I'll keep a eye out.

fun and nice quick read !

Loved the story, erotic, wished it was me and you!!!!!! Will be looking forward to more.

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keep your stories with this rhythm

Bud Bundy finally nails Kelly and knocks her up.

Disgusting, degenerated shit-paramour.

Raping a drunk chick? What kind of pieces of shit rated this above a 1 star?

Even if she did wake-up at some point and was sober enough to make a conscious decision, everything that happened after he got her into the bed and before she supposedly woke up was sexual assault and or rape. He admitted knowing that what he was doing was wrong. H'mmn, nearly all of you are a bunch of wanna be rapists.

Oh, fucking awesome! Lol! This begs for an encore ;)

this made me cummmm so hard, please please encore xx oh I'm 24 female :-*

Loved it.

I hope you add to this story

Please continue the story what might I say WOW

How nice to read a story without the thousands of terrible mistakes in grammar etc . and to find someone who knows that worser is not a word. Good story , could not have been bedder.

OMG girl you just made me nut WOW

To be continued.