This story need to be relocated to the Sunday Church bulletin.
You refer to Jeff as "tin Man"...why ? It might have been interesting to know.
This story is very captivating and fun to read. The whole thing is cute, sexy, and erotic all in one.
very lame story. don't quit your day job (if you have one).
Boorrrriiiinnggg!!!! I agree totally with the 'lame' comment.
I didnt even get wet while reading this pile of junk.
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Any date, any marriage
This story need to be relocated to the Sunday Church bulletin.
Just a question
You refer to Jeff as "tin Man"...why ? It might have been interesting to know.
The best one I have read so far.
This story is very captivating and fun to read. The whole thing is cute, sexy, and erotic all in one.
lame
very lame story. don't quit your day job (if you have one).
sorry to say but....
Boorrrriiiinnggg!!!! I agree totally with the 'lame' comment.
more sex less mumbo jumbo
I didnt even get wet while reading this pile of junk.
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