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Feasting on the Fourth

byScottishChieftan©
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by coldcomfort07/13/09

Short & Sharp

I enjoyed this story. I usually prefer a little more backstory and the woman in your tale was a little faceless. To have known a bit more about her would, in my opinion, have heated the tale up a little. However, you description of the action held my attention and it made a refreshing change to read a vampire story which did not follow the old cliched route. Well done!

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