Dancing Ch. 02

Nice

I love it so far but would like to see Matt's point of view. Is that to come? Probably not if you haven't taken it up so far, and from your introductory comments I gather that the story's already been completed. Shame, I always liked the change in PoV in your other stories. Still, good work.

Great read...

As always it's easy to connect with your characters and visualize what you're trying to bring across in your story. Love your work, love the drama, the emotion. Can't wait for the door to open to Matt's past. Just one thing though - I hope Matt has been giving Aaron a change of clothes and the usual necessities :-o... Lmao! Cat

It's so wonderful

I really love all your stories, and this one is no exception. Beautifully written, and so poignant!

... my fingers are tingling. This is such a great story

This is such a good story. It's full of emotions and the plot is awesome. I wonder what's in stor for them?

so sad...

the sentiment at the end just kills me. poor aaron....

Eternal damnation for mean people...

...who bulldoze through this world leaving damaged folk in their wake. It does not matter what various categories a person is part of, if they are mean-they suck. The momma in me wants to gather these two young men into my arms and gently rock them forever.

Emotions conveyed well

I am enjoying the story and I felt a strength of yours is showing real emotion. You allow the reader to put theselves in the character's place and feel what a person would feel in that experience. I loved the way you also showed the age old 'don't judge a book by its cover' by having the aloofness and seemingly cold personality of Matt being due to something the people around him wouldn't guess. Great stuff! I'm glad I found a finished story so I don't have to wait for the next installments! ;)

like how youre bringing their soft emotional sides out

both are healing and comforting each other. I like the sexy talk, I like Aarons' sexy thoughts about Matt, its a turn on