All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 13'

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LadyFalconLadyFalconalmost 15 years ago
LMAO

loved it!! and no anger just unbearable anticipation..and I adore that feeling. Can't wait for the climax...of the story. giggles.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
OH WHYYYY!!!

That's just so fucked up killing Nadia off (sobs)... poor poor Andrae. You sure know how to make a person do the angry-cry. Looking forward to the next chapter!!

PennLadyPennLadyalmost 15 years ago
Whew!

Well done. Poor Andrae and Nadia. I hope she comes back soon (she did say something about it wasn't the first time she would die).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
MURDERER!!!

You heartless cruel murderer!!! You just murdered my favorite character Nadia! Not to mention my hero Andrae!!!

You vile creature! Then why is it that I still award with 100 points??? I must have gone nuts because damn good writing!!! :D

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 15 years ago
hrmmm....

I'm thinking there is more to Nadia's death than meets the eye... I'm saving my anger for another day and trying to hold my curiosity at bay until your next installment!!!

392OhMyGoodness392OhMyGoodnessalmost 15 years ago
Not Nadia's Farewell

Please, please, please, tell me that is not the end of Nadia. She hadn't even really gotten a good five years worth of power usage. Why not use her second death as 'the test' that she and her demonic beau have to go through?

starry_nightstarry_nightalmost 15 years ago
Sad

Not feeling anger, just sadness for everyone especially Andrae. They didn't even have kids yet. At least that way he could have kept a part of her with him. Is this just some cruel test the High Council's making them go through?

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 15 years ago
Anger is right!

We have to wait a whole 'nother week for the update? That's just torture. You big meanie, lol! This was great, thank you!

KatLadyKatLadyalmost 15 years ago
I'd hate you . . .

if I didn't love you! Hurry up and bring my girl back so Andrae can stop hating the world and everyone in it.

lildragonlildragonalmost 15 years ago
Yup

Your a cruel person Purefire. How bout a longer chapter next time to make it up to us? Still love ya though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

Oh no!!!!! This is terrible. Oke, sorry....... I have to go read the next chapter.

(Please say it will all be oke?!!!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh My God.

:'( Im so sad right now. If you dont bring her back I dont know if I can read any more about these brothers because you broke my heart.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
NADIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...So sad. I think i short circuited my computer with my tears.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
OMG

I cried so bad i am still crying while i am typing this sigh this is the worst i have cried reading a story but i love the way you write

IttyBitty1IttyBitty1almost 14 years ago
sad

This is a great story; but terribly sad... I cried my eyes out :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I love reading and do so when ever I can but I have to say I really do feel your stories are far too rushed and way to obscure in details no clue how you and this yet as only read this far but would be better if slowed down took a breath and quit rushing everything

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