Finally you've posted another chapter... can't wait for the next. Keep on going, maybe with another installment in which the sister wants another time her brother's cum inside her womb.
You are developing the story and your writing abilities well...each chapter got better and better, both in style and content...can't wait to see what you do next with Josh and Fran...or a new venture.
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Anonymous08/02/09
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it was ok but you killed the story with the two year wait between chapters also if you think there are a lot of good writers on this site then you are mental 90%suck big time most are not even good enough to be arousing if you continue writing never keep the readers waiting more than a month or two between chapters and if your bio is up to date you started posting while under age which is illegal
I would appreciate it if you could refrain from comments not related to the story, and if you had bothered to look, you would have seen that my profile has not been updated for two years. Please get your facts straight before you try and complain.
Some people can complain about the pettiest crap! Please don't get too upset about negative comments from someone who doesn't have the courage to even show who they are. Hiding behind the cover of anonymity does not take a lot of courage, so just discount such remarks. Although, I admire the fact that you are willing to take up for yourself, please realize that there are a whole lot of readers who enjoy and appreciate your work. Personally, I enjoyed it so much that I hope you will do a sequel to it. Keep your chin up and keep writing!
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Sooooo goooood
Finally you've posted another chapter... can't wait for the next. Keep on going, maybe with another installment in which the sister wants another time her brother's cum inside her womb.
grey boxers?
Passion killer!
wonderful
wonderfully written, hope you continue there saga!
Keep it up (literally and figuratively)
You are developing the story and your writing abilities well...each chapter got better and better, both in style and content...can't wait to see what you do next with Josh and Fran...or a new venture.
so-so
it was ok but you killed the story with the two year wait between chapters also if you think there are a lot of good writers on this site then you are mental 90%suck big time most are not even good enough to be arousing if you continue writing never keep the readers waiting more than a month or two between chapters and if your bio is up to date you started posting while under age which is illegal
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I would appreciate it if you could refrain from comments not related to the story, and if you had bothered to look, you would have seen that my profile has not been updated for two years. Please get your facts straight before you try and complain.
I enjoyed it thoroughly, and admire your grit!
Some people can complain about the pettiest crap! Please don't get too upset about negative comments from someone who doesn't have the courage to even show who they are. Hiding behind the cover of anonymity does not take a lot of courage, so just discount such remarks. Although, I admire the fact that you are willing to take up for yourself, please realize that there are a whole lot of readers who enjoy and appreciate your work. Personally, I enjoyed it so much that I hope you will do a sequel to it. Keep your chin up and keep writing!
Great read, thanks
wow great story
This was a great story where is ch 4
Hot
Sexy, smart, hot, erotic!
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