by X-Factor
although this story is rudimentary and lacks much plot or dialogue, that's exactly why it succeeds... my finger got raisined while i read about 10 other stories before choosing this one as a goody because it was quick and to the point and didn't waste a lot of time with florid detail or too much backstory.
There is no denying the quality of the writing by this talented author, but this introductory story to Charmaine leaves many things unexplained. When did she first meet Danny? How long had they been going together when this incident with Pete occurred? When did Charmaine first make love, and to whom? How could Charmaine cheat on Danny? Had Danny cheated on her? Had he been neglectful? There are many questions that are left unanswered for the reader.