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Bravo. Technically excellent and compelling. Great metaphor.
Very nice, chic-ie. ;-)
Your poems are like some petit fours,
For they're both sweet and savoury--
Très élégante, mais zut alors!
You're "off my peg?" What knavery!
--Anon.
I like poems about poetry
Good job. I think there is something appealing in the self-reflexive. And the pun is fun.
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A very clever idea and perfectly written
Clever and concise
I admire the cleverness and precision with which you develop your subject. M.
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"Whole lotta things I ain't never done
I ain't never had too much fun."
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