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It sounds like you guys have a lot of fun
I think it's great that you have so much fun together, I wonder how long you two have been married? It seems that you have found some magic to keep your marriage fresh, and I wish you all the best. Thanks for sharing your fun with an old reader of erotica........Rich
It's very good, but...
I voted this a 5 and clicked on 100 (loved it), but that's in spite of the fact that the story is too tame. The "this is our role-play" disclaimer at the beginning is like "the murderer is the butler" before a mystery story. To tell us about a wife disloyally succumbing to a horny salesman is more forbidden, wicked, salacious, and arousing. To know he's her husband (and she knows it) is not. It's well written, but knowing the end from the beginning is not the way to cause eagerness in the reader--"Oh, wow, what happens next?" Better to tell us at the end that he's the husband (although that, too, is a cliché).
Cute
Nice story for a change. It's nice to get away from all the garbage appearing on this site lately. Cheers.
Nice story.
Well written. It's nice to read a story like this one it's different from the normal 'loving wife' section. Which is a good thing.
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