Development was needed as the story is turning into the Romance I wish it to be. However I'm glad he explained it was his neice he was with. Not left to be brought up later. If some people took this heart it would save a hell of worry and confusion.
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Character Development was needed
Development was needed as the story is turning into the Romance I wish it to be. However I'm glad he explained it was his neice he was with. Not left to be brought up later. If some people took this heart it would save a hell of worry and confusion.
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