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30 Days or Bust: Day 06

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by Anonymous

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by Eric_Shift07/17/09

Not enough

Way too short. Not enough detail. Please add more, pad it out. Chapter 4 was the best so far. I'm Not try to be nasty.

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by Anonymous07/17/09

Understand

that Eric is an Aussie, and their emotions (by the nature of their history and the way their culture has grown) are more exposed and enable and encourage them to deal at more elemental levels than most of us Americans. For me, I enjoy the enticement and the teasing of a good story line that leads us along, that has some options to it, and that allows my own erotic thoughts to grow along with the tale. Bravo! You do excellent writing!

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