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What was different?
Dont know what was different. This chapter had a profoundly alternate effect than the last. I could actualy picture what was happening in that bathroom.
Keep it up
Gripped
This series has kept me gripped, hot and aching for more. Rare to find such excellent writing and the lack of fufilment for the characters just makes it so good.
Very Nicely Done
All of it, the tension, the characters, the partial fulfillment, the grammer & pacing - very nicely done. Keep up the good work, I really want to see how you continue.
It Builds and Builds
so nicely! And all of the "tits men" (like me, no surprise there) are having a cardiac field day waiting for the first spurt of milk.
Well Done
This is the first time I've read any of your work and I thoroughly enjoyed it. You write very well.
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