Dont know what was different. This chapter had a profoundly alternate effect than the last. I could actualy picture what was happening in that bathroom.
Keep it up
This series has kept me gripped, hot and aching for more. Rare to find such excellent writing and the lack of fufilment for the characters just makes it so good.
All of it, the tension, the characters, the partial fulfillment, the grammer & pacing - very nicely done. Keep up the good work, I really want to see how you continue.
so nicely! And all of the "tits men" (like me, no surprise there) are having a cardiac field day waiting for the first spurt of milk.
This is the first time I've read any of your work and I thoroughly enjoyed it. You write very well.
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