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30 Days or Bust: Day 12

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by Anonymous

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by Eric_Shift07/23/09

Perfect Opportunity

If Mark dosent talk to Lisa NOW, hes an idiot

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by Anonymous07/23/09

NOT!!!!

Sorry, Eric, but that is a wrong move, controlled by the little "head". Look at the way Mark has been painted for us, a person of integrity, who keeps the contracts he makes with Leo, his boss (written), with his customers,with Lisa, especially, as love and posssible long term committment enter the picture. This may be the part of him, of his personhood, that is the bottom line that finally lets Lisa commit to him completely. At least, that is where I hope this story is leading. This is terrific writing; l8bloom keeps leaving us all sorts of options.

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