Can Mark go another two weeks without telling her how he feels, and still hope Lisa hasnt meet someone
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Anonymous07/24/09
Intriguing!!!
That is the way you write. Every so often you insert a phrase or sentence that allthough intrensic to the story line elicits other thoughts, pictures or visions, such as, "I parted the folds and dipped my fingers into the cream pot", spoken by Mark. If men do have a "common" wiring then most of your male readers thought, as I did, about dipping fingers into a lover's honey pot and not just into a jar of ointment to sooth Lisa's breasts. I wonder??? The "Deflowering of Nakita" is a beautifully tender piece of writing.
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Can Mark go another two weeks without telling her how he feels, and still hope Lisa hasnt meet someone
Intriguing!!!
That is the way you write. Every so often you insert a phrase or sentence that allthough intrensic to the story line elicits other thoughts, pictures or visions, such as, "I parted the folds and dipped my fingers into the cream pot", spoken by Mark. If men do have a "common" wiring then most of your male readers thought, as I did, about dipping fingers into a lover's honey pot and not just into a jar of ointment to sooth Lisa's breasts. I wonder??? The "Deflowering of Nakita" is a beautifully tender piece of writing.
wow
This series is awesome!
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