Its hard not being near the one you love.
And you achieved a VERY erotic scene in having Lisa move to her climax along with the lovers achieving the fruition of there joining. Terrific writing.
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Its hard not being near the one you love.
Yes, The "Little Death"
And you achieved a VERY erotic scene in having Lisa move to her climax along with the lovers achieving the fruition of there joining. Terrific writing.
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