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Is this the end?
Is there more? If not it seems a bit abrupt.
Is this the end?
Also this was the most gentalist way I have read ANAL being described. Usually its 'in her tightest hole' or 'it was so tight I came almost instantly' but this was put so delicately, it made it sound almost appealing.
Faithfully Yours
Yeah, that's us, the Aussie and the Yank. I guess Eric feels as I do, that there were a lot of readers out there that missed a great story. I do agree with him that this is the most tender anal experience I have ever read. This was a nice resolution for the story, the final committment to each other in marriage, a new and rewarding career field for Mark, lots of money to ease their life together, and with her already lactating breasts (which I am sure Mark will keep very active) all she has to do is go off the pill to get their family started. Thanks again for sharing your Muse with us.
Great twist
I loved the story and the ending. The murder twist at the end was great. Thank you for not killing off the main characters. That is a difficult thing to pull off and not destroy the whole experience. Not saying you couldn't do it, but so far I have only read two authors in this field that have,
Please, sir, may I have some more?
I'm more than a little put out about the misleading title. I feel like I've been shortchanged! Please consider writing 12 more stories to round out the 30 days! This is by far the most well written series of erotica I've read on this site so far. I seldom read the fetish stories, but if this is a fair sample, I will enjoy exploring them. I've just read all 18 in one sitting, and was thinking it was too bad that I'd stumbled upon your series while it was still in progress, rather than having access to all of it at once (yes, I can be a somewhat greedy reader). I was heartbroken to realize there are only 18.
Even if you don't write more, thanks for these. I really enjoyed them! And my husband may get some "assigned reading" as well. I haven't yet decided if I'll just ask him to read the stories for some roll playing inspiration, or better yet, ask him to read them to me in bed. I'm leaning towards some of each. Thanks again for a great read! I know I'll be enjoying these stories again soon.
beautiful..
the most beautiful story i ve ever read.. i just dont have any words.. im just awestruck and getting all emotional.. oh god ur a superb writer.. please write some books too.. eagerly looking forwards to your books..
your awed fan..
and i dont have an account here..
wow
all I can say is wow, loved it from end to end, please continue
Wonderful!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Very well written!!
great story
This was a great story. actually had a decent story line to it. keep up the great work
demonstrations
I love this series and have read it several times. Don't know why it just occured to me this time, but why draw the line at demonstations? He might consider recruiting his wife into a bit of exhibitionism, all for the cause of teaching the new escorts, of course. ;-)
A lovely, loving, series
i can't thank you enough for sharing such a love story. The tale itself was gorgeously quirky, but the stand-out for me was the writing. The story wasn't just told, it was painted - and in glorious colours.
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