Chasing Love Ch. 03-04

Love it!

Claire and Cal just need to settle this! Cal wants the baby and as been a major jackass! Claire is just to stubborn to realize it! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

Great Chapter!!!!

I love the way you're developing the story. I just wish Cal and Claire would step being a pain in the ass to each other. Cal loves her but does not want to tell her that and Claire does not want to be controlled by Cal even though she is pregnant at this time. I can hardly wait to see what you do with the next chapter

I only have one negitive comment to make;

you're not very passionate when you come to your parts of love making. For a woman writer, you write as a man, it's more like all your love scenes are a wham-bam-thank-you-mam. Otherwise your writtings are very good. But I did miss two things though, the 1st. being; when did Danny extend his service, you told in your 1st story segment that Danny only had one more year, but after a baby and a still birth, Danny is still around. 2nd, How did Danny make his excape and who captured him in the first place, just curious.

Tired of all the bickering

Not only do I have problems with all the people with a "C" in their name but also who is together with whom.

Claire seems to me absolutely immature and I cannot seriously believe that she is a doctor, even if only in fiction.....

The storyline is dragging a bit, nothing really NEW happened in this dubbel chapter.

How old is Claire & did you have to make her so immature?

where's the hot steamy romantic sex???

there are exactly 11 sentences of sex in this ch. boo! after being gone 6 months, wouldn't danny want to give his wife some foreplay? oral? kissing? wouldn't she want to take his shirt off and then maybe suck his cock before he just sticks it inside her???
also, why doesn't anyone use contraceptives in this story series? if jess/danny didn't want 3 kids within 3 yrs, why wasn't she on the pill or using some form of protection?
why don't claire & cal talk things through and declare their love for each other and the baby they're going to have? unbelievable!