All Comments on 'A Husband's Revenge Ch. 01'

cant wait to see how he gets his revenge.

Good start ----- where's the rest? Ok, I know I've got to wait.

Curious to see what happens next.

As angry as he's excited about seeing a 12 inch dick stretching his little wife's butt hole, if he's gonna masturbate, like 90 percent of Loving Wives character husbands do, before he shows the other fucker of his woman he's some SEALs trained guy? LOL

Looks like just another total revenge fantasy. Hopefully there will be interesting developments as ther story progresses.

who they are. Get the goods, get custody of the kids, get her fired, get the divorce, and move on in your life.

The lover's cock was longer than this chapter. Why would a writer split his story into partial pages? More comments? Votes? This is very likely a one shot story that would take two or three full pages on Lit and here this writer is dragging it out for unknown reasons. Do not reward bad behavior with high votes.

either the stories about some asshole cum loving fag of a hubby or a story that last five second.either teasing or cockold stories,make me want to puke.

and hoping that what follows will be satisfying...

You have a good start here, keep up the momentum. I like a good revenge story where the protagonist takes the time to formulate a plan and opts out of doing the first knuckle-headed thing that comes to mind. Your hero has the cell phone pics, I can't wait to see what he does with them, and find out what kind of reception his wife receives when she gets home. I definitely want to find out how your hero plans on using the fact that Nick is a family man to his advantage. Good luck, break a leg, whatever, just crank out the next chapter, please.

It seems that lately all of the stories on Literotica have chapters that are really short as this one is. This one isn't long enough to even get my interest worked up. I think I'll just wait until the whole story is posted, and then enjoy the story when it's finished. Maybe if enough low scores are give for short chapters, the authors will get the message and start posting fuller chapters. It's a waste of time to wait 5 or 6 days to read the next little bit of information the author wants to put on the network. Good luck with your story, I'm sure it's going to be well writen and a pleasure to read.........Rich

You deserve "00" Nothing here that you'll like or dislike. POST the FULL story next time.

"Two and one half inches around." Around would mean circumference: Circumference divided by Pi = Diameter. 2.5"/3.1416 = .796 of an inch.<P>

So this guy is 12' long and .8" across. Kinda makes his comment about the husband being a "pencil dick" ludicrous.<P>

If on the other hand you mean 12" long and 2 1/2" across then 2.5" x 3.1416 equals a circumference of 7" around. Now THAT'S gotta be a pain in the ass - rather than a tickle. ;=)<P>

Gotta knock you down one on the length. Too short a segment to get into the character development which is sorely lacking.<P>

But thanks for sharing.

At least this time i don't think it's going to be one of those story where he stays with her because of the kids. She already made her mind up because the husband would never be any good to her now. Then again some writers can come up with some unbelievable and stupid ending like leaving the kids with her and him paying her to screw the other man.She knows what she is doing so i will wait and she ihope it doesn't end like your other ones with him still with her.

At least this time i don't think it's going to be one of those story where he stays with her because of the kids. She already made her mind up because the husband would never be any good to her now. Then again some writers can come up with some unbelievable and stupid ending like leaving the kids with her and him paying her to screw the other man.She knows what she is doing so i will wait and she ihope it doesn't end like your other ones with him still with her.

At least this time i don't think it's going to be one of those story where he stays with her because of the kids. She already made her mind up because the husband would never be any good to her now. Then again some writers can come up with some unbelievable and stupid ending like leaving the kids with her and him paying her to screw the other man.She knows what she is doing so i will wait and she ihope it doesn't end like your other ones with him still with her.

This should be published once... this type of story should never be done in chaps.... just not enough to it

with his desires to wreck toe cheats and not wimp out to some polotically corect liberal wimp ass idea of what a man would do. He would get mad as hell and if he was too small to fuck the nigger (he was one you know) then take a baseball bat to his black ass and then cut his dick off and make the wife eat it....I would do it that way

Trying to intensify interest by spreading this over more than one posting actually ruins the story. It seems that many Lit.com writers have no sense of continuity.

This is the author who cannot comprehend the complexities of "your" vs "you're." Yeah, it's rocket science alright.<p>Add the .8" dick width (I thank the previous commenter for the math) - I've seen bigger suppositories.<p>Unpleasant subject matter indicates your marriage sucks big time.<p>Tiny chapters are a waste of my time.<p>This much attention to the anus should probably place the story in Anal.<p>In short, ole boy, you done grunted out another steamin' pile o' words unfit for the horniest among us.

complainers bother you. Yes, it was a very short chapter--but you're the author, you can do what you like! (And if readers don't like it, they'll complain. What the hell, they complain anyway....)

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Powerful, angry stuff. The husband has every reason to be furious, and I hope his revenge lives up to our hopes! Thanks, ohio

. . .so good!

This story could have been better if she would have cried for his baby from that big old niggah salami!

she is bitch. ok.

I can't wait to read the rest of this one!

Thats why they make stun guns, tranquilizer guns and baseball bats, Had it bee me, His wife would return to find his cock and balls stuffed down her throat and her tits and cunt down his.

Crude and stupid story.

But I have read this plot 1000 times before.

101 remedial cuckolding. TK U MLJ LV NV

Lets see what the second chapter brings.

You caught her cheating and you are not a wimp and certainly not a cuck. I look forward to chapter 2!

Come on you white trash bitch skank. Lets go to the trailer park for some goodies. Then I can pimp out your white trash ass. The only thing you will be good for is large dogs and horses.

Why do the husbands in these stories always just stay and watch? It took him way too long to decide and take pictures with his cell phone. Otherwise decent enough story so far.

I agree with the following comment that the picture taking was very late in coming. One thing I want to point out to all readers who are told by the author that someone has a 10" or even greater cock size when erected. This is primaily unadultered bull shit when you have a chance go Kinsey's ground beaking study of sex or later Masters and Johnson and searvh for sizes of the male organ. The average is around 6" and for people who are super endowed 10" or more (12" in story) they make up less than 1% of the male population with almost no one at all 11" or more. I guess these authors consistently lack to take poetic licensce and flat our lie.

Not a lot of detail about why Sweetie would cool off of Hubby and start up with her Boss. As Jack Webb used to say, "Just the facts, Ma'am!" Trouble is, it makes a story less exciting or interesting!

3*

in many stories, but do bear in mind: the US has 300+ million people; assuming half are male (not quite, but close) that give us 150 million. 150 million times 1% is still 1,500,000 men. John Dillinger's "tool" was preserved after his death as it was 11" when erect. In the circle of men I have know well enough to discuss with honestly (I am strictly straight), around 70 or so, one of them had an 11". I would have to agree with the poster that men in Literotica are "super-endowed" a lot more than 1% of the time.

is best for the cheatee but dire straits for the cheaters, TK U MLJ LV NV

but never fell in love.

no surprise here.

some of the readers have already been through this.

Why does the cock of every cheater have to be described as being so ridiculously huge, especially when anal sex ensues? That detracts from the story. 8 inches is huge, 9 is colossal. Bigger than that is so rare as to be non-existent. Infidelity is infidelity. One would doubt that the wife would go for something unusually small, but 12 inches?

I hate cheating cunts. I forgot how this ends. Let's see...

any white woman who fucks a black cock sucker should be shot

where she belongs, and pour brown shit in her cunt

to the curb she be going, TK U MLJ LV NV

"...or the best one; "if you wait until tomorrow, I'll make it worth your while." Tomorrow it seems, never came."

Shee-it, ain't that the truth? After 40 years of marriage to the same woman, I found the same thing. She's no cheater, its that this seems to be a truism.

THAT NIGGER LOVER SHOULD BE SHOT STAPPED AND BURNT ON A STICK SHOVED UP THAT DIRTY PUSSHY

And some serious revenge on the cheating slut. Too bad he didn't rip her butt so badly that she needed to go to the Doctor's for surgery. We'll see.

What is with this gal? I can not understand why people let themselves be involved in these situations. She should consider what she wants and how much it is going to cost. The simplest solution being to break the marriage before cheating.

thanks for the offering.

put this monkey shit in inracial

A nother slurppuff nigger tale

u have a great opportunity here, dont waste it. tell your wife u know and beg her to let u watch and clean her up after he is done with her. u will really start to like it after a few times.

what kind of cunt are you. Be her willing cuckold??? Fuck that you wanker I'd be her executioner! slimey cunts like you should be castrated in case you infect the rest of humanity.

And if your a woman you should have your cunt cut out in case you breed.

liked the set up and situation presented. there is a lot not presented, as to how this all occurred, but sounds like a normal progression, in this category. whether he was black, yellow, red, or white really wouldn't have mattered, at least to hubby. his attitude after the discovery is what perks my interest. anyone can handle good times, it's how we handle the tough ones that count. the author already told the reader, he wasn't fond of watching his wife with other men, but does that mean that this story is built the same way?

"she had to get with a few of the teachers, after dinner, and go over the new testing data." - I freely admit that I know nothing about teaching, but isn't that the type of thing that would be done after school?

He's correct, down to several decimal points. A U.S. Penny is 0.75 inches in diameter. A U.S. Nickel is 0.83.inches in diameter. The lover's joint is closer to the penny than the nickel! How could husband even make it out from a distance? Unless husband really was a "pencil dick" ( diameter of about a Number 2 U.S. Pencil (1/4")), there is no way this penny-diametered lover's dick was going to stretch anything.

The first part of the name of this website infers literacy, Choice of wording is important!

Making errors confusing "around" for "through", or more technically, "diameter" for "circumference", is not an error an author or editor should make, especially in an area where so many readers attach such importance.

What did the guy being black have to do with anything? It had noting to do with anything. Staypuff just likes to throw in some racist shit every now and again. Aside from being racist garbage, the writing is awful. What an asswipe.

Yes. Those data meetings happen right after school or on teacher in-service days. Usually on the in-service, because they are working, so they have to be paid.

Let me make myself clear, dipshit! You are so effiminitely offended that the villian is black. Well, let me clue you in, Asshole....SOMETIMES, the man breaking up the marriage of a white man and a white woman IS A BLACK MAN. So, you are demanding that no black men are to be depicted in this manner? You are the biggest racist I have ever come across. Grow up, you whiny ass baby, or simply pass over stories that upset your delicate, biased conceptions. There are black men in practically every community in America that get their jollies on having sex with white married women. To the black men, they aren't,fucking the wife. They are fucking the white man husband.

Selfish, unloving, sluts who use their husbands and whore themselves out.

TO 8/26/16 FUCK YOU ASS HOLE

Would be interesting to know just how many stories there are on Literotica in which one or more huge black cocks are fucking a married white woman. I've read more than a few where the black guy could use his cock to enter the pole vault event at the Olympics! ~~~~And in how many stories is the white wife a school teacher,often with her own kids? You'd think that these women were too damned stupid to graduate from college and become teachers! ~~~ At least it appears as though the husband actually has a pair and will not accept being made a cuck without taking some revenge. ~~~ In too many of these BBC/White Wife cheating stories,the husband accepts being made a cuck and,in some actually wants to watch or participate. (THAT'S some SAD shit!)

All I'm waiting for is to see what kind of revenge is to be had for our cheating wife and her well hung married lover.

Great writing and fully agree these black dudes got nothing worth anything north of their dicks. BBC with no brains just like in real life. MAKE AMERICA GREAT AGAIN. Sarcasm yes

Hope the revenge is severe on bitch and bastard. So damn tired of this bbc nonsense.

.....And he does nothing???? REALLY!!!!

nor does it instill loyalty, honesty and respect, TK U MLJ LV NV

Ironically, the "12 inch black dick" is more of a myth than a fact. But it does make for good, lazy stereotype writing.

True nonsense and incompetent storyline. I hope you can build up to writing a real story one day. So much random and incorrect information in this story, and no plot! I particularly thought the ending was uninteresting and lacking in any writing skill.... deserves a -1 star I gave it two but they were 'mercy-stars!... Pity Points!

Really, Slirpuff? Seriously?

Disappointing for so many reasons.

Awaiting revenge

FINISH IT, ASS-WIPE!

This should get interestin.

Even someone as accomplished as Slirpuff couldn't resist using the bbc dodge to show how slurry the wife was.

Cheating is bad enough; but with a BBC is adding salt to the wound!!! BTB revenge coming??

No point trying to save this marriage, he would never satisfy her again

I'm a nuke the problem kind of guy, so here goes my idea of revenge in this situation. First, find out as much as I can about Nick in a day. Spread the pictures around, making sure to hit all coworkers, family and friends of both of them. Then divorce the stupid bitch. Tranq Nick and chop that dick off, leaving it in a dumpster somewhere. That fucker will never have another woman again.

no real man stands there forty five minutes watching a stranger fuck his wife ,and do nothing.you either leave and divorce her ass and or you attack him ,get jump on him, at get one punch in before he beats you ass , the fact he;s bigger than mean.s nothing ,and i;m not talking about his cock either . get over your self . divorce the nasty cunt ,is the only revenge you need .

Where is your revenge?

This author can write, but he's anatomically ignorant and seems to have a fetish involving the mythical BBC. Evidently, this super black stud has a pencil dick.

cuck authors' tale

I really hope hubby gets REAL REVENGE; not some pitiful RAAC crap...

Still thinking that the great Slirpuff used the cheapest LW trick in having the wife fall for the used up bbc myth. Burn the bitch and her boy too,

Damn

I keep reading the same tales over again. Fucking cheating cunt. I don't remember the revenge but we'll see...

Like so many other writers, you are woefully ignorant of how bodies are constructed. A dick of twelve inches is probably five or six inches around. At two and a half it would look more like the thin end of a pool cue. Don't believe me? Go get a tape measure and check yours!

I'm so sick of this BBC myth crap myth crap.

Also a 12" Dick being rammed into a rectum Would likely rub for the intestine as it passed into the sigmoid colon.

Also shoving a penis into a non prepared rectum would be guaranteed to wreck the anal verge and cause intense bleeding.

Just once I wish someone would strike for realism in these pornographic scenes.

Amy Justin Bieber and be accurate it wouldn't take a lot of research to get it that way.

The bitch has something coming...

I agree with the comment below;; this myth of "conquest of the white pussy" by the irrisitable BBC not just nauseating it's racist.

You never hear the revere racial connection do you? Racist and anti-white male.

Too bad she wouldn't have a kid that looked like a checkered flag. Slut would say, WHOOPS!!

Notice he never confront this Nick

Too bad Nick didn't make her bleed to death, and sluts' husband didn't take a ball bat to Sambo. That way, they'd both be dead...

Why? The "lover" is a deadman and she is a dead woman. There is no compunction, only retribution. Hope it was great, because this is the end.

Very good so far but I want to finish before commenting

Now let see if the author will truly BTB after what she did.

Twelve inches long and two and a half around? My finger is thicker than that. But since it's a BBC the guy has to be intimidated. Racist carp.

@MarkT63, why is BBC worse? Maybe if you're a racist! Would it be any better if EVERYTHING was the same, but NIck was white?

Hhmmmpf, yup, hhmmmpf. LP

Foolish writing....no man would watch that long and, at the same time describe how destroyed he was. You portray him as a voyeuristic cuck.

Just not a believable plot. An otherwise good story you torpedoed.

He just witnessed a guy doing his wife and he was wondering what he should do…really? how could he not know what to do? Make the actions and reactions a little bit real please.

I am so sick of the racist,THE black guys always have bigger clocks and unbeatable in bed". I've seen a lot of black clocks in locker rooms and only a few stand out. Guys are built pretty much the same. Truly this sexual black racist superiority is vile and untrue. Also, the average female vagina is about 6-8" deep; I've several hundred pelvic exams so I can speak with authority on this. Thus a 12 inch cock slamming into the cervix, which is VERY SENSITIVE, would be incredibly painful.

Further, any gut would likely hand around for a few photos vut linger to torture himself.

VERY good idea to blow up his world by outing him to his wife and busting his wife to the curb. He has zero reason to stay, and every reason to get out of the marriage as fast as practicable.

You write well but totally torpedoed this and most of your other stories.

Burn the cheating bitch