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Keep on writing this story.
Fantastic story. I loved reading this series it is outstanding. You definitly need to continue with this story.
Great Chapter!!!!
You wrote another great chapter in this series. You wrote the end at the end of this chapter does that mean you're finished with the story? Will there be another chapter in this story about the Davin and Jessica?
The End?
The End? please tell me your going to continue this wonderfull story.
More.
You can't end this story like this. You should not be like so many other authors on this site who do not finish a story. This is too good a story to leave unfinished.
Regarding continuing the story
Thanks to all who liked my story. As to the topic of continuing: Unfortunately, I found myself rather out of ideas and rather than writing on without inspiration (and risking a boring/repetitive story, I thought it would be best to finish the story.
If I come up with some new ideas on how to go on, I'll love to continue, but for the time being I think it's best if I let it lie.
Why be any different than most of the other....
Why be any different than any other of the writers on this site who do not finish their stories.
agree
i agree a good story ruined by a writer that can't finish it what a waste if you want ideas ask the readers you could have the mom catch them or have them go to college together or have the mom join them or have him finally ask angela out which would only serve to hurt his sister but maybe angela could join him and his sister this was a lousey place and way to end a story very dissapointing
To the commenters below...
I don't get it. This story was just a tale the author made up for your entertainment. Then you two losers have the audacity to insult the author when the story doesn't go on for a thousand chapters? Finish the story? What the fuck do you mean by that? Do you you want the author to keep a running daily blog on the goings on of these characters? What a bunch of fucking losers. It's readers like you two faggots that ruin this site. Fuck you.
so-so
good series but a shitty way to end it needs atleast one or two more chapters to tell how they stay together,if the mom finds out and if she gets pregnant you need to continue
More Rubbish
Crap Crap and more Crap
waste of time
this series would have been better left UNPOSTED than to be left UNFINISHED. half a story (and this is much less than half) is worse than no story at all either finish it properly or delete it until you are ready to finish it properly as is it sucks.
Seems finished to me
You might or might not want to write more, but so far as I'm concerned this is a decent place to stop.
Ok
It must be me but I thought it was good.
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