I was sort of hoping something would change Richard... The same thing got boring after the first fiteen chapters. The only excitement in this story is when he finds a girl with tits bigger than the last.
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Anonymous10/23/09
idea for story
The story is great, but it's getting to be about the same, with diffferent women. It would be nice to see Martin meet a lady doctor that can p]trick his father into falling asleep, and when he wakes up, Martin has his dads cock, and his poor dad gets Matrins. Also the wife gets all the money for her and her son matrin. hehe.
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Anonymous12/02/09
I think you should have Martin commit suicide
Let's face it every human being has his limits. Martin should either kill his father or commit suicide. If he does the latter you should have his mother divorce the father and take him to the cleaners.
I'm continually fascinated by people who are so deeply appalled by far fetched stories. If you don't like it... just don't read the next in the series. I don't see why it's necessary to be hateful and cruel.
English
Tease!
Loving the new fast update schedule though, keep it up!
Father
Needs to die, and so does this story.
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i thought this was literotica
that story belonged in a coffetable book
sheeesh
horrid
get off this site, loser
ok
keep up the good work.
Eh..
I was sort of hoping something would change Richard... The same thing got boring after the first fiteen chapters. The only excitement in this story is when he finds a girl with tits bigger than the last.
idea for story
The story is great, but it's getting to be about the same, with diffferent women. It would be nice to see Martin meet a lady doctor that can p]trick his father into falling asleep, and when he wakes up, Martin has his dads cock, and his poor dad gets Matrins. Also the wife gets all the money for her and her son matrin. hehe.
I think you should have Martin commit suicide
Let's face it every human being has his limits. Martin should either kill his father or commit suicide. If he does the latter you should have his mother divorce the father and take him to the cleaners.
Great Stuff
These stories are silly and fun. I love em'.
I'm continually fascinated by people who are so deeply appalled by far fetched stories. If you don't like it... just don't read the next in the series. I don't see why it's necessary to be hateful and cruel.
Sequel!
Sequel is needed!
We need more of the fathers adventures he's great
More of this guy with the big willy
About time for this looser to die of AIDS.
There should be a very hot story between ch 25 AND 26
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