All Comments on 'Thirty Minutes or Free'

this is really good writing. i came away with actual joy.

A really well-written and unusual kind of story....

I loved this. Reminded me when I was 15 and had a newspaper route. There was this woman on Abbey Road that I'd have to collect from every week. A great tipper, however, she usually wasn't wearing very much when she answered the door. One week ... oh well, you know.

THAT was a wonderful story. Hell; it's even plausible. You write it well; easy to understand and it flows like like a "natural" stream. (pun intended) You put the words together in a logical, interesting, story-telling way. Thank you. Ron

I really loved the story line and the sex was hot. Great Nude Day story and good luck in the contest.

Very well written. I just discovered you as an author a few nights ago and have finished almost half your works! You are a great writer, your stories are interesting and flow well. Please keep up the great work and go back and add to a couple of the unfinished series CvsN, etc.

This is a wonderful story! The SEX is three-alarm HOT, and the buildup to it is nicely done. I'd like a bit more on the thoughts and feelings of the boy and the women, but I love it as it is.

Thank you !!! Simple as that !!!

Elena f27 Greece

Very nicely written Tall Tales. This is one of your best stories. I enjoyed it very much, I even laughed out loud a couple of times.

please write more

Great story and well written. Sorry I didn't read this in '09 to help you with the contest but I'm sure you did well.

The sex was worked in nicely and wasn't made to seem like the focus of the story, but it was good. Got to check out the rest of the stories by TTT.

The story flowed so well that when it came to sex it seemed as natural as the Reynolds. The funny lines had me in stiches. I have only recently found your site so am a bit late commenting, but better late than never. Now in my favourites list.

Thank you for the story and the memories it brought back.

Never got laid on my paper route but did see naked women.

As usual, TTT delivers a well written story with just the right amount of sex for the plot. Damn, I wish I could write even half as well.

Great read and as per title, for a short story it was wonderfully put together and written. Suberb characters (Harold was my fave), terrific build-up, fab humour, hot sex (with added heat for the simple reason that it wasn't clear if anything was going to happen and if so how it was going to happen) and a definitive ending. Great work T3

What a good read, fun and gentle, patient build up.

It made me wonder how much better off we'd be if our entre into sex was generally with a more experienced partner or teacher?

Keep developing your stories, the world needs more imaginative play.

Except for one thing....

"It felt a little weird; the stickiness of the vinyl under my legs"

True naturists ALWAYS have towels to sit on. Other than that, I truly enjoyed the story (being a naturist myself), and gave it a 5.

I had a summer job as a delivery boy for a pharmacy -- and found it interesting when customers ordered birth control or condoms, etc. My best friend had a summer job as a TV repairman and told me about some instances when he got to have sex with customers (one time, he got there and found the tv unplugged and the housewife getting undressed). I never had such luck that summer. Fortunately, I had a hot new GF who took my virginity!

Just discovered this story. What a fun read. Loved Harrolds comments! Your writing is nothing short of wonderful !

Your descriptions and dialog are so realistic as to make one feel they were there looking on. Your ideas for stories are fun and exciting. Thanks for sharing. I and thousands of others wish you were still writing. We miss you! 5-😊😊😊😊😊

Beautiful story. It took my breath away.

5stars hands down

Lovely storey, thank you! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️