I loved this. Reminded me when I was 15 and had a newspaper route. There was this woman on Abbey Road that I'd have to collect from every week. A great tipper, however, she usually wasn't wearing very much when she answered the door. One week ... oh well, you know.
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Anonymous07/11/09
Nice Story
THAT was a wonderful story. Hell; it's even plausible. You write it well; easy to understand and it flows like like a "natural" stream. (pun intended) You put the words together in a logical, interesting, story-telling way. Thank you. Ron
I really loved the story line and the sex was hot. Great Nude Day story and good luck in the contest.
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Anonymous07/12/09
Great Story!
Very well written. I just discovered you as an author a few nights ago and have finished almost half your works! You are a great writer, your stories are interesting and flow well. Please keep up the great work and go back and add to a couple of the unfinished series CvsN, etc.
This is a wonderful story! The SEX is three-alarm HOT, and the buildup to it is nicely done. I'd like a bit more on the thoughts and feelings of the boy and the women, but I love it as it is.
Great story and well written. Sorry I didn't read this in '09 to help you with the contest but I'm sure you did well.
The sex was worked in nicely and wasn't made to seem like the focus of the story, but it was good. Got to check out the rest of the stories by TTT.
The story flowed so well that when it came to sex it seemed as natural as the Reynolds. The funny lines had me in stiches. I have only recently found your site so am a bit late commenting, but better late than never. Now in my favourites list.
Thank you for the story and the memories it brought back.
Never got laid on my paper route but did see naked women.
As usual, TTT delivers a well written story with just the right amount of sex for the plot. Damn, I wish I could write even half as well.
Great read and as per title, for a short story it was wonderfully put together and written. Suberb characters (Harold was my fave), terrific build-up, fab humour, hot sex (with added heat for the simple reason that it wasn't clear if anything was going to happen and if so how it was going to happen) and a definitive ending. Great work T3
English
really good story
this is really good writing. i came away with actual joy.
Good stuff!
A really well-written and unusual kind of story....
Cool plot line - great story
I loved this. Reminded me when I was 15 and had a newspaper route. There was this woman on Abbey Road that I'd have to collect from every week. A great tipper, however, she usually wasn't wearing very much when she answered the door. One week ... oh well, you know.
Nice Story
THAT was a wonderful story. Hell; it's even plausible. You write it well; easy to understand and it flows like like a "natural" stream. (pun intended) You put the words together in a logical, interesting, story-telling way. Thank you. Ron
Great
I really loved the story line and the sex was hot. Great Nude Day story and good luck in the contest.
Great Story!
Very well written. I just discovered you as an author a few nights ago and have finished almost half your works! You are a great writer, your stories are interesting and flow well. Please keep up the great work and go back and add to a couple of the unfinished series CvsN, etc.
Oh, Does This Gal Give the Pizza Boy Great Tips!
This is a wonderful story! The SEX is three-alarm HOT, and the buildup to it is nicely done. I'd like a bit more on the thoughts and feelings of the boy and the women, but I love it as it is.
Fantastic !!!!
Thank you !!! Simple as that !!!
Elena f27 Greece
Completely enjoyed this one.
Very nicely written Tall Tales. This is one of your best stories. I enjoyed it very much, I even laughed out loud a couple of times.
great story
please write more
Thanks
Great story and well written. Sorry I didn't read this in '09 to help you with the contest but I'm sure you did well.
The sex was worked in nicely and wasn't made to seem like the focus of the story, but it was good. Got to check out the rest of the stories by TTT.
Loved the humour
The story flowed so well that when it came to sex it seemed as natural as the Reynolds. The funny lines had me in stiches. I have only recently found your site so am a bit late commenting, but better late than never. Now in my favourites list.
Fantastic story.
Thank you for the story and the memories it brought back.
Never got laid on my paper route but did see naked women.
As usual, TTT delivers a well written story with just the right amount of sex for the plot. Damn, I wish I could write even half as well.
Perfectly constructed
Great read and as per title, for a short story it was wonderfully put together and written. Suberb characters (Harold was my fave), terrific build-up, fab humour, hot sex (with added heat for the simple reason that it wasn't clear if anything was going to happen and if so how it was going to happen) and a definitive ending. Great work T3
Experience teaches
What a good read, fun and gentle, patient build up.
It made me wonder how much better off we'd be if our entre into sex was generally with a more experienced partner or teacher?
Keep developing your stories, the world needs more imaginative play.
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