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Suki and Mamorku

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by PennLady07/14/09

Way too fast

She's so beat up that she should stay in the hospital for a week, and then she's having sex with this guy? I know it's fiction, I know it's RP-based, but it still wasn't quite believable. This is a great premise, though, if you had the time to flesh it out. How did they meet, what are the general feelings between the different demons (not great, it would seem, in this case), things like that.

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