All Comments on 'Gary's Best Day Ever'

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norcal62norcal62almost 14 years ago
Really should rate a best of LW.

What a fine fantasy of two in love and conquering the world together.

Love the romance and entire story. Keep it up!

wonderingwhywonderingwhyalmost 14 years ago
Sounds perfect to me!

Hopefully Gary's days won't always be so hectic and stressful for him, but I certainly hope that his Alice (the lucky duck) will continue to be attentive to his needs... no matter what sort of day he's had. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Now THIS is a Loving Wives story!

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
You are correct.

A good woman can make up for a lot of bad things that happened earlier in the day. Just as you wrote.

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