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RossDanielsRossDanielsover 14 years ago
Very thought-provoking.

Thoughtful and well-written. And it explains a lot about how excited I was when the kids from Catholic school transferred to our high school in the ninth grade. Things got a lot more fun after that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting Essay

Well written and thought out, Josie. Your essay brings up some interesting points about structured religion in general, and the Catholic church in particular. It will definetly make for some interesting future audio submissions. Thanks, Josie. Hugs RCG.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What church are you in?

I'm trying to figure out if you're complaining or celebrating. Considering that the Catholic church is the only Christian faith to have sexa as a sacriment [marriage, for us, is a contract to have children]. Statistically, Catholics enjoy sex more than almost any other group [again, mostly Christian].

Try going out and reading an Andrew Greeley romance novel... full of eroticism and faith, and how sex is proof of God's love for us... oh, yeah, and Greeley is a Chicago priest.

Amanda K

josieslutjosieslutover 14 years ago
Sex

I'm sorry, Amanda, what exactly is your criticism? The sacrament of marriage is a covenant between two people, and sexual pleasure is recognized by the church as more than simply the means of procreation, but a gift that spouses give to each other for their love (Pope John Paul II wrote an entire series on sexuality). I am not criticizing the church for its precepts, but pointing out that much of the practices and symbolism in the church is inherently erotic. My pussy got wet more than once while suffering on those kneelers.

Hugs,

Josie

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 14 years ago
Josie? Your a naughty girl.

You are also obviously a very sexual woman. Who likes to please others and enjoy yourself at the same time. Good for you! You enjoy yourself. And if you enjoy yourself thinking about religon and sex? Then again go for it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great stuff!

Unfortunately, I don't have a very brainy response to this but I know that this was well-written and very introspective. I'm glad to see the intellectual side of the erotic universe, if for nothing else than to prove the close-minded wrong about us. I can only pray you keep up the fantastic work you do Josie.

-Russ

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
gotta love Catholic girls

Great piece. Articulate and interesting. I must say I do enjoy your audio pieces more. But, at least I didn't have to clean up after experiencing this piece. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Gods Greatest Gift To Man...Woman!

It's so nice to hear a woman's perspective on what I've been saying for years... Women (or females of the species) control the real power. I call it the "POP" factor...(the POWER OF PUSSY). I have made a life-long study of how to pleasure women and I have found that arguably the greatest pleasure a woman can experience is the power of knowing that she is in total control of that moment in time. As the song, "Brass In Pocket" so aptly states..."...there's nobody else here...no body like me...I'm special...so special...I want to have some of your attention...give it to me!!!" To all woman of planet earth and Josie: Keep doing what you do best! Kisses!!! Love: Ron

JaymalJaymalover 14 years ago
Succinct and Beautifully Phrased

And all the more convincing for it. I was brought up within a fairly austere form of Protestantism - not quite as 'succulent' as the Catholic faith so manifestly is. However, repression and the resultant heightening of eroticism is something I'm very familiar with. I thoroughly enjoyed your treatise (almost as much as I've been enjoying your audio offerings) and the erotic charge that ran throughout it!

mrbaddaddymrbaddaddyover 13 years ago
Repress me, please!

As one who experienced the full indoctrination as a child, your insight hits home. It actually gives me a bit of new insight into my own complex sexuality. I've been enjoying, but grappling to understand my D/S urges for decades since I was a little boy in the pews. I used to blame the Church, but now I give thanks. And I could not agree more that the most creative and intense sexual partners are Roman Catholic refugees.

Et cum spiritu tuo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I ask of you please, please use your that amazing gift of yours and make this into an audio

Short version =

I connected with your story but immediately wanted to hear it from mouth of the one that is able to write such a thing.

Your dirty fantasy's and the story above are amazing as written. But you telling the stories with your 'flair?' elevate you to a dirty story telling slut level above any that i have heard. Because of your amazingly dirty fantasies that i am loving, voice, passion and delivery, for the fist time I found myself imagining what a story teller looked like in public. I wonder how you decorate the body that delivers such hard fucking orgasms. A vibrator in you all day - really? i have wanted to get that shit handled for years. Weather your fit or fat your damn fucking sexy.

So on to my point... Your so engaging that i think the story above would become more real and alive if you narrated it. I read the story above (amazingly well done) and can picture myself as a boy in a pew fantasizing over the pretty girls then feeling ashamed for the sin. Again, I connected, but immediately wanted to hear it from mouth of the one that is able to think up, believe in, and write such a thing.

My thoughts went to the following - use it if it inspires you....

For withholding your voice from us on such an important subject, your daddy whom you willing submit yourself and body to, shall punish you in a way that makes you crazy. 9you know better than I) Maybe withhold his rod from you with only a vibrator deep in your ass. you can not cum for 3 days and then you will read your story while he slowly fucks his new wife in your view. Daddy, being a good catholic father, will further his discipline of you by not touching any part of his wanting servant until her sins are forgiven. 2 more days pass and his little whores aching holes go untended as she submitts to the orders from the one she serves and wants most to please. Her body tense with the need for orgams, wet dripping sweetness runs down her thighs. Daddy wont touch her till her sexy sin inspiring body is cloaked and kneeling before the figures that shaped the thoughts in her head. In the cold dark confessional she will confesses her blasphemous notions to the father optimist that years of kneeling and submitting her mind and covered body for approval and blessings made her submissive to men. And the teachings of the Bible showed her that women have power when they remove the cloaks, and place their hot wet swollen pussies on the bodies of the leaders of the church and the men of the world.

I gotta head out but the rest basically goes...

The priest tells you put your face to the whole in the wall and has you blow him and swallow it all. you are then to give him your panties but of course you have none. he ordered you to put your ass to the whole and submit your self for salvation or atonement but your no pantied fuck wholes are blocked by the chastity belt your father made to keep you pure. The priest orders you to get the key from your daddy or you will not be forgiven. Daddy then delivers you to the confessional and hands the priest the key. He ask the priest to ensure your salvation.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Brilliant. As a male that was raised catholic, this resonates deeply with me.

RedrosewitchRedrosewitchover 10 years ago

A very thought provoking piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

miklosfairmiklosfairalmost 9 years ago
Catholic girls are hornier

From my own experience growing up, Catholic girls were the first to take the pill and If they couldn't get their hands on the pill, loved having their pussies licked and were really into anal. I knew one girl, Angela Esposito who was technically a virgin at her wedding, but just about every guy in my HS had fucked her in her ass-hole.

LegendInMyOwnMindLegendInMyOwnMindover 1 year ago

I'm a lifelong Protestant of an evangelical flavor, but this story resonates with me. Well said.

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