Daisey: Daddy's Whore Ch. 01

Loved it

This story got me hard as hell. It was well written and I cannot wait to reas more.

bingo

this is exactly what i look for on this site. your idea of hot is fucking hot my friend.

great start

The story needs to be at least twice as long. You caught my attention but it was over just as it got to the interesting point. Great first try.
Dom Woolf

Please write more

It was so hot. my pussy got wet so fast, i was soaked by the end. More please

next installment please

HOT...can't wait to see what daddy makes her do next

Waiting to read more!

Can't wait to read the sequel. Good beginning, man!

Mmmmm...

This story made me so wet... I just had to do it... wow.

chapter 2?

This is my favourite story in a long time. I've been waiting for you to continue it or write something else. Please hurry... lol.

not bad for the genre....

....are there really that many repressed little girls out there fantasizing about daddy?Pistolpackinpete

can't wait for part 2

I really enjoyed your story. I was disappointed that they didn't get far, but I am anxious for part 2.

MORE PLEASE

I LOVED IT, CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!!!!!

pleeeease write more this got me so wet its my ultimate fantasy and u write it brilliantly i cant take my hands out my knickers...

Very Nice

Great story and certainly got my blood flowing, please continue

Write more, duh

Yes, write more! Lots more

Nice Beginning!

Keep writing. You mix innocent and slutty well, and I appreciated the small moral battle Daddy went through before deciding to go there. I could tell that you were enjoying the story while taking your time to create the right mood. Continue. I'd definitely like to see more in this series.

that is so fucking hot! i cant wait for more

delicious!

What a turnaround

One page from 'innocent girl' to captured sex slave. Well done. The excitement builds relentlessly with the heartrate of the reader. "Pound it to her!" is what he is thinking as you close this chapter.

taking daddies hugh cock in her mouth

love the story so very hot and horny.
can't wait to read more of daisey's story daddy taking me.

Write more. Write more soon.

more more more ,omg i'm a girl and i'm soo wet , i wish my dad was like that

Hot

Love the both innocent and sexiness of it all. Oh where's my daddy? This story got me hot and bothered!

Please write another chaper soon.

So hot!!!

Please write more soon!!! I'm a lesbian, but I would love for my Daddy to be fucking me because he is SO hot!!! I love this story!!!

mmmm

Please give me more, this is amazing

very good

Would love to read more. Ty

MORE!

I loved it! Please do write more of this!

More please

PLEASE DO MORE. ITS SO GOOD !!! ;)

10/10

ch-02 please.

Begging

I need more this story is so naughty. God I'm wet

MORE

C'MON