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A Penny for Your Thoughts Ch. 01

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by Anonymous07/15/09

No Thanks

I'll skip the rest, not well written, I don't care.

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by Anonymous07/16/09

Must agree

First, what was interracial about that? The whipping between past and present tenses was distracting, and the general writing, while okay, could have been better.I was left not really caring about the rest. I may hang in for chapter two, but I may skip the rest.Get an editor, please.

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