It's a vivid hot and erotic sex scene. I wanted to lick the goo from her pussy that is on his hand. Really erotic stuff, thanks for the good post.............Rich
This is my new favorite story! I could read it again and again, and never get sick of it. Kinda of like a great movie that you repeat the "one-liners" on. I'm so glad you're writing again!
English
That was a real hot get together
It's a vivid hot and erotic sex scene. I wanted to lick the goo from her pussy that is on his hand. Really erotic stuff, thanks for the good post.............Rich
I love these two!
I'm so glad you wrote a follow up story! These two are hot, and I really like the writing. Will there be another?
Crippling...Intense...and Breath Taking.
This is my new favorite story! I could read it again and again, and never get sick of it. Kinda of like a great movie that you repeat the "one-liners" on. I'm so glad you're writing again!
Lovely
A nice build up to hot steamy sex on a hot steamy night. What could be better?
Wonderful.
Got me going, with a vengeance.. I can't wait to read more :)
This was...
...delicous!
Second comments
This is my second comment, after the anonymous comment before;
"She looked at him hotly and teased her bottom lip with her teeth, making small noises of desire at him"
Fuck, I find this SO FUCKING HOT!!!! Goddammit, you are a wonderful writer.
Thank you!
Thank you very much, everyone. I truly appreciate your comments and compliments.
Any constructive criticism is also welcomed. I'm glad you are enjoying my writing :). I enjoy creating these stories as well.
- masked_author
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