by qdata
Especially for beating his mother, he should beat his father's ass while being tied up. Beat him enough that it saps his father's strength from him and then for fucking him up the ass, he should return the treatment. Dry fuck him up the ass to show his father what it feels like.
GREAT STORY EXCEPTIONAL WRITING. AFTER READING PART 5 AND 6.
CAN'T GET INTO DAD WITH JOHN BUT AS FOR THE REST OF THIS
FANTASTIC.
I, too, could live without the male bi action, but it's your story, and it's great.
First four were great. Continue the series and get rid of Tony.
Like the commenter before, I thought the series was good until the arrival of Tony. He needs to go. You screwed up the names there at one point toward the end, I think. Stop the beating and introduce golden showers and other toilet games instead.
The boys should have more sex while the mothers watch and play with each other.
If you keep Tony, introduce him to Sarah, then have a fivesome,
FOR A GREAT STORY THE ENDING I'AM SORRY TO SAY SUCKED. TONY TALKS ABOUT HIS MOTHER,ONLY VERY LITTLE TO SAY ABOUT SARAH AND ANDY.THE MAIN COUPLE OF THE STORY. WHAT BECAME OF SARAH AND ANDY??????. STILL A FAN BUT A LOT OF QUESTIONS.......................LAROC OF AGES