All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 14'

painful.

These past chapters maybe short but it is NOT lacking anything. Such a sad but realistic scene and I think I like Liam even more...*batting eyelashes*...lol. Their father and the High Council should get the big F.U. because Nadia name isn't Jesus so she shouldn't have to play the martyr every time. Great chapter and can't wait for more, I enjoy it so far.

albeit short. But the short chapters after the substance of some of the others is painful. It's kind of a tease to wait a whole week for a single page when you are used to getting 2 or 3. But I do love your work and I'm looking forward to more (hopefully longer) chapters.

...nevermind the critics. Don't let them get to you. You just pen what comes to you and let the story "do what it do". Looking forward to the next chapter. (^.~)

Charisma and Jameson are leaving? This is so sad. The Brethren are going to be separated again. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Andrae. I think Nadia said that he will be okay, but what's going to be the bright spot in his life now? Looking forward to the next chapter!

please please make the next part longer please?

love it.

Awesome! This chapter had me crying!! Which is good in this case! Poor Andrae! He is still my favorite! Nadia said he would be ok but how can he be when he is alone?!?

Unfortunately I started this series with the fourth set of stories, so I knew Nadia would die.

I hope you decide to bring her back.

I'm def crying right now well tearing up over here f I should've just left it alone and stopped with the order f I'm sad