All Comments on 'A Pleasant Wednesday Afternoon'

This is one fantastic story. I loved reading it. Could you please write one more chapter letting us know if they have a baby.

Loved the premise. I half wished this was written by a woman, it sounded like I would finally get a female perspective on the whole issue. Moon, keep it up.

A well writen bit of work with plenty of erotic sex between two people who have a lot of history between each other. She won't find another male lover who will love her as much as her son since she let him fuck her. He loved her before having sex with her and that just blossomed more now that he has had her womanly charms.Thanks for this nice sweet story............Rich

I always enjoy your stories. Thanks for another good one.

As usual, you have written a tale of tender, romantic love between a mother & her son. You have departed from your usual formula of having the mother get pregnant by her son, but I find it a good story just the same. Keep up the excellent writing!

Simply outstanding. Brilliantly paced and a very good read.

A good quick read but i would love to see a bitmore build up to their coming together. Still quite enjoyable though.

good story...got me turned on. voted nd faved.

would have loved to have fucked my mother......very erotic....

Why do you idiots think women should have DD tits? What that usually means is they have huge asses and waists to match the huge tits. Get your head out of the video game world and into the real world will you? Too bad I can only go as low as one star.

Erotic, didn't go on forever like many stories on this site. But I suggest putting less emphasis on breast size. Almost every incest story has bra sizes reported, often in the first paragraph. The mom is not about the bra size.

I loved it, except for the biting. Nibbling is a turn on for me, but not biting....

Five* from a reader new to your stuff, thanks!

Wonderfully written, it took me right onto the bed with them...the sights, sounds and most of all smells of the sex.

I thought here we go again DD breasts. A little over the top and nearly kill this story for me. But there again there’re guys out there jerking off at the thought of bigger ones. Still I gave you ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nice. Really enjoyed. Thanks.

I don't like big droopy tits. B cup perky for me. Plus I don't give a shit about boobs if there is a pussy in the room.

5 from me.

The only part of a woman's breast that gets 100% of my attention is the nipple - the rest is just the milk bag. The larger the nipples, the longer I love to suck and tease them. I really do not pay much attention to the overall size of the breasts, although I do prefer smaller, because they stay perkier longer.

What's with the biting?

Some girl bites my cock, I'd be gone. She'd never see me again.

great discripive writing - give me more !!

Oh dear. We seem to have an uneducated reader who obviously doesn't know about writing fantasies.

He wants writers to "get real".

What a moron. It's not called erotica for a laugh. Look up the word you imbecile or stop reading and commenting on a very good story.