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by Samuelx

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Garbage- don't read

sucks just like fag sam

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Empty of anything

One must travel outside earth's atmosphere to find anything as vacuous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Go man go!

Tongue firmly in cheek Sx.

k69k69almost 15 years ago
Constructive criticism

Hey Samuelx, after reading the first couple of paragraphs you need to research your characters a bit more. Police officers are usually smarter than the average person because they are supposed to catch the bad guys.

Instead of writing 5 stories a day maybe take some time to research the characters and write 1 good story every few days. Maybe you'd get better feedback from everyone.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...