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by Anonymous07/17/09

Garbage- don't read

sucks just like fag sam

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by Anonymous07/17/09

Empty of anything

One must travel outside earth's atmosphere to find anything as vacuous.

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by Anonymous07/17/09

Go man go!

Tongue firmly in cheek Sx.

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by k6907/20/09

Constructive criticism

Hey Samuelx, after reading the first couple of paragraphs you need to research your characters a bit more. Police officers are usually smarter than the average person because they are supposed to catch the bad guys.

Instead of writing 5 stories a day maybe take some time to research the characters and write 1 good story every few days. Maybe you'd get better feedback from everyone.

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