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Let's find pretty women

after dark on the beach at Fort Lauderdale

But leave your prayer (beads) behind for (the) day.

Reproach tomorrow. (<--replace) [Good men and women

Learn from such as we have learned from you, ] <---reword bracketed

Like John the Baptist found honey as sweet

In the desert and really ate locusts, (cute.)

But Pharaohs before him got laid in the sand

As did their minions by the Red Sea. <---reword this line

I like the way you've carried the biblical theme. I found this poem hilarious. Good work. What I expect from you.