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Love is a Miracle Ch. 05

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by Eric_Shift07/18/09

Good job

Is John going to be a problem, maybe Chris can arrange a little get together with Football players for him.

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by Anonymous07/18/09

Love it!

Aww this was a sweet chapter! I wonder if johns going to be a problem! hmm! Cant wait to see what happens next! I love your stories! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

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by Booksaholic12/01/11

Had to stop reading

I enjoyed the first chapters starting with Ashira's story. However the tedium of every few chapters predictibly someone would announce they were pregnant became boring. As I continued to give the story a chance, when Serinity also predictibly announced her pregnancy I no longer felt the need to continue on as I felt tje same storyline was being repeated time and time again. I would like to say Ashira's story started out captivatingly original and action filled.

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