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Epitaph of a Late Conversation

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by Sapphos Sister07/16/09

Yes, she will haunt him

But what a comfort her ghost will be - she whom he has treated so carelessly. A lovely poem and thank you for your reference.

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by DreamyLeer07/16/09

nice syntax

this is not a daring poem. please break out of this old moldy shit and at least try. fwiw, id love to see you do something earthshaking. id respect an honest effort at innovation more than this poem. youre sinning against god and your own talent. stop.

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by Epmd60707/17/09

second stanza

has some timing issues. Other than that this poem is almost pure excellence.

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