All Comments on 'Daddy Was Passed Out'

Good job- very hot, and you kept true to the teenager's perspective the whole time. I paused on a couple of words, like "squiring," and calling a pussy a "puppy," both of which I hadn't heard before. They weren't bad, but they made me stop and come out of the story for a second. If they are regionalisms, slang specific to where you live, I would use more conventional words to keep this very hot action moving. Overall, fantastic, wet and hot for me, keep writing!!

very hot would like to read about her going back for seconds

i agree she needs to go back and bring her friends over every couple of nights

this story is hot!!! as an olde guy, I have always fantasised about a young girl doing me or, me doing her. Need another chapter to this well written and sooooooo hot fantasy

Dumb story. Who gets a hard on and cums when he has passed out?

I loved this story (puppy or not!)

I hope Daddy and his little girl can fuck like this again and again. Since Daddy is so drunk, maybe he can suck her little titties and hold her hips while he fucks the shit out of her.

I like it and I want some. I wonder if my Daddy ever passes out?

cool keep write a second chapter!!!!!!!

What happens next, it is a great start to a story but it really needs to continue

would love to read more and see what her friends say or if her and her dad to it again

I like father/daughter incest third best behind the all time favorite, Mother/son followed by brother/sister. I liked all you stories especially about the son fucking his 55 year old Mom, I thought that was great. (I had read it before but today I read all your stories.)

Thank you for writing, keep up the good work.

He got used in the best way and he didnt even know it

Please do a second chapter

This could go different ways if you write more and the question is, which way could it go.

You need to do a sequel! Loved it!

That's a great storie next chapter please.

I don't think it was possible, but it was a good idea

I don't care if it was realistic or NOT- It was still a good story, Not Great but Good!

Unfortunately mistakes in wording/spelling and stilted writing killed the fantasy for me.

I'd still look forward to a part 2!

Did you ever do it again or suck it till it cum

FYI - the hymen is located at the mouth of the vagina NOT two or three inches in!

Would be hot if she kept fucking him while he's passed out and ended up pregnant by her daddy.

I have dreamed this would happen to me with my daughter!

Great feel to think of this incident with my dad's younger brother.... Kinky feel I get..chennaishobs

Havoc187, so truuuuuuuuue!! That'd be soooo hot and kinky!!

Wish it was longer and had impregnation/pregnancy in it...

Wish it was longer and had impregnation/pregnancy in it...

My dream came true!

Was very hot and would love to have you continue this saga

An OK story but cut off way too soon. 3 stars. And it had a great start—one I hadn’t read before.

Bill S.

Would love to see more and a edited clean up. She wiped him off then leaves and then next chapter picks up a bit after and then goes to next weekend. Would be awesome to see. There is an extremely pathetically small amount of stories where the male is asleep