Just as wonderful as the first chapter. I can't wait to read more from you in the future! Excellent, truly excellent.
Great job in writing such a sexy erotic story!
I loved this. You should write more. :)
I absolutely adore your writing. Such excellent and creative metaphors that fill the mind with beautiful imagery. I'm in love with both chapters of your story and look forward to reading more of your work if possible!
(Insert sarcasm) Yay anorexia!
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Excellent Again
Just as wonderful as the first chapter. I can't wait to read more from you in the future! Excellent, truly excellent.
Erotic!
Great job in writing such a sexy erotic story!
Loved It
I loved this. You should write more. :)
Lovely
I absolutely adore your writing. Such excellent and creative metaphors that fill the mind with beautiful imagery. I'm in love with both chapters of your story and look forward to reading more of your work if possible!
The hollow of her stomach?
(Insert sarcasm) Yay anorexia!
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