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please please PLEASE tell me your going to continue this story!!!!!! i absolutly LOVED it!!!!!! please continue
Loved the Story but...
you seriously need an editor. It was hard to read because of the sentence errors. (Sentence run-ons, missing punctuation, wrong word used here and there). This caused the story not to flow as easy as it should have. I would love to see another chapter. It's a great story line but PLEASE get an editor!
I read some of the other comments and found
I must have really been into the story,because I didn't notice any thing that distracted me from the content and concept of the story............ Emotions are all so closely linked together, love, fear, lust, and hate all are overwhelming to the mind. She must have felt fear at first then when the lust took over her senses, the love for him must have over powered any of the other emotions. You have a scary mind, Thanks.......Rich
Please tell me you will continue this
Oh I hope you keep going with this
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