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Crappy writing
Drive-by tale marred by really bad writing.
Dreams
This story was clearly a bunch of shit dreams. Even fantasies do not work out like this shit....
Just bad
Random, irrelevant details that added nothing to the story combined with a lack of punctuation that made the story virtually unreadable.
Sorry..**
Sorry** about the ones before me and there problems,,,,but I really liked the story and strange things happen when you least expect them to and you just lay back and say what the 'XXXX' just happened. What a bunch of prudes that have never lived there lives on the edge.** Thanks. JAG/TSO
you certainly have a sexy way with words
I like the way she threw caution to the wind and gave herself up to the stranger,took the passion that he had for her and didn't feel guilty about it. I think the condom was unnecessary, because I think she would have loved to feel his semen shooting deep into her belly, and after he left, having his leaving dribble down the insides of her thighs as she went to shower before her husband returned home. That's the visual I had. Thanks for the good short story,you do put a lot of passion into your work........Rich
great read
I don't know what the problem was for some of the people leaving responses, but I thought it was great! I'm hoping there will be a follow-up soon.
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