by Peterspeter
Peter, I applaud you for originality, composition, engagement, character development with oh so few words, and a can't-put-it-down story. I see I have a couple more of your stories to read tonight. I hope they are half as good. <p> <p> <p> Looking forward to your next story. Hope the wait isn't too long.
I really, really enjoyed this story. I hope that there will be more chapters to this story.
You wrote a great story about the sex club. I like how you introduced Carl in this story and had him find his roommate Pete who introduced him to the Club. I like how Carl was able to lose his virginity to Margaret and how you described it in the story. I hope you write another chapter in this story.
Liked it a lot. This can go on for a long time (the club, not just the fucking!). I'm so glad you haven't introduced 3-ways, please don't.
As an Old Nerd, This brings memories of failure. I needed this 40 years ago!
Loved the story. It was well written and the sex was great. She made him feel safe a secure as he lost his virginity. Keep it up with other gals....
A unique approach to young sexual encounters. Will plunge into the series with excitement. In 50 years of erotic stories I never read anything like this!
A sex club for those not a part of the "in" crowd of cheerleaders and jocks. What a stupendous idea! And how well executed. The build up of the sexual desert set the stage for the arrival at the refreshing oasis.
I'm so happy that there are 18 more chapters!
So respectful, without unnecessary crudities, and without making first-time into something unbelievably advanced and overly long.
The sad thing is that so few have found this wonderful tale. I have searched Literotica repeatedly for nerd and for geek and this does not come up. When I saw the title in a cross reference, I went to it immediately.
A quite minor suggestion is, instead of "he" and "she" or "you" in the dialog (which btw was VERY good), use names occasionally. It helps me remember their names, plus it makes dialog more personal.
Paul in Oklahoma
That was beautiful! Nice, shy buildup to building his confidence. Nice to have a young woman take control AND guide. Your pen-name doesn't tell the truth... I'll bet you're a woman!
A wonderful idea. I only wish that it existed while I was in Engineering School. I don't know how you thought of this idea but thanks for doing it.