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Nicely done
Liked this. Nice little twist at the end. :) The line about everyone over 18 seemed a bit out of place -- maybe it was meant to be moved? Anyway, hope to see more.
I liked it
Very sweet... I liked the over 18 line where it is, it was kinda funny. Like Tracy knew this story had an audience or something.
over 18
the reason i popped that over 18 line in where it is was to add some humor. i tried to submit this story for months and i kept getting rejected "are the characters of consenting age?" i didn't know if it would get approved this time but i wanted to clear that up.
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I think the over 18 line was funny.
Yeah nice twist but...
I would only give this story 50% mostly because of this:
"...If it took having sex to get his attention, I could do that. But if I didn't try, I might never get a chance to see what could happen."
What happen to Tracey's strong character? She made a complete 180 turning into your typical dumb slut with no self-respect.
Disappointing
Nice story
with a nice ending. I hope you write more.
*****
I liked it. (Even the bizarre 'over 18' part, which took me out of the story for a moment, but made me laugh, knowing Literotica)
not that great
Well it was okay, but you sorta lost the touch of story somewhat in the middle.
You should really stop making stories, they're bad and suck dick
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